Kia Ora Bloggers,
Today I am sharing a slide with you where i have described 2 photo's of a Rifleman with adverbs, verbs and adjectives. I have also fixed some sick sentences and made them better. After that there is a slide that we had to finish the story.
Have you described your bird or ( Bat) of the year?
Blog you later! Lucy
Kia ora Lucy, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing on your blog. You have created a great list of adjectives, verbs and adverbs to describe the tiny rifleman. I especially like the alliteration of flying fast and eating eagerly. Well done on improving the sentences by adding some of your adjectives and adverbs. They are definitely makes reading them more interesting. On page 4, the story has been started for you, your task is to complete it. I look forward to reading your finished story.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Miss Burt, Thank you for sharing your positive liking's. I am also exited to be seeing my finished story. I will work on that.
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lucy